Main task: restarting my edits

 After watching my second drat a few times I have decided to restart my edit completely. This is because I found that there was very little narrative structure and room for my to effectively add in inserts cutaway footage and voice overs/interviews of myself; I also found that I was relying too much on the audience having an understanding of the issues I would be addressing throughout the documentary which meant I did not explain and add enough information surrounding my topic. 

I will be creating a plan to illustrate how I aim to lay out my sequence, I think for this I will break it down minute by minuet so that it is not too over whelming.